kiddy spine crippler
So the time has come to test the aids foundation in the drew land of pickles... or is it the pickled land of drew.... either way the chocolate pudding has immersed inside my cockological being for en eternity to come... yes... CUM IN MY FACE... none the less this animation shows the despite of being a homosexual dolphin john walrus suck my dick bwah!!
reading this review...it made me cry.
This animation possesses the truth about the every day life of the sandwich, it is a truly harsh life time we live in, the expenses of all the true 1-5 that can encounter the score of everyone alive... a five?... or a 0... one is a number the other is just a letter, we shall all remember the greatness the one carried with him, the once sandwich of jill, we will jackson the mays of billy on the bwah!!! WTF BOOM
IMA FIRING MAH LAZOR
eat da poo poo
its too bad that most people dont consider this for the time or effort put into it, but for the disturbing content in it, whereas if someone like say, egorapter were to submit this very same piece of work it would be welcome with open arms just because its him, because all these people are lamb banana boys.
oh and tristan is gay
Wow, definitely better then the first, it was lengthy which is good, I must say you got pretty good voice work there, however the robots are too hard to understand, but I liked the recap scene when the robot was talking about what happened, the music was very well placed, the artwork was greatly fitted I really liked it actually.
the backgrounds werent too shabby, I see a lot of potential here, try and use a thinner brush, up the fps a little, always makes things seem more fluent and smooth, I go on 24fps and it does help since I used 12 for a while.
Definitely want to see more from you here, keep working on this, keep improving, try some frame by frame animation, good luck with the next part I think you could have something special here bud!
Thanks for that great review! Im glad to see people are still viewing my work even in these late days. I lost flash for a while but now I have it back, I'm currently working on the second episode of the deli but when thats finished Im debating on what I should work on next...I have multible projects.
dawg I tripped bawlz on this, its like acid.... BUT WITHOUT THE ACID DAWG... dayamn.... dawg.... my life has been changed.... your da best dawg!!
jyeah ni**er you know how we do it
First of all the animation is nice and smooth, I like the style of art, and the frame by frame is VERY well done, love the emotion in the character and the sync with the music, the animals were well detailed untill they got squished, and as I said before the frame by frame is really really good, I love how you interact with the environment, the humor is there, made me chuckle a few times, so I think this is something to cherish, if only you submitted it for christmas :P this animation is overall some of the best FBF I have ever seen with really nice artwork and pretty amazing background work, if this was any longer it would really make its mark on Newgrounds, but I doubt it will have any trouble doing that the way it is, Me sees this on frontpage ;)
Some nice smooth animation and background designs, nice shading effects I know they can be quite difficult, liked the whole idea how he was trying to blend in with everything, the artwork was well done and you get the "christmas spirit" untill the end lol, thats just a comical phrase, well anyway I cant see anything to critosize about this apart from maybe the animation could have been more motiony even though it was smooth it seemed a bit flat, if you released this for christmas I think it would have been more welcoming from people like lonchimp, ITS CHRISTMAS DOOD, ALIENS CAN DO WHAT THEY WANTZ! 4/5 8/10
Thanks for the feedback.
This was thrown together in a little over a day.. inspired by ChristMASS winning daily first on January tenth (no offense to Hustla and Tomar) The haste in composing it is probably the cause of the perceived flatness. It kinda fits the lethargic music though. Makes the ending seem that much more random.
Right first of all, yeah, its waaaay too short, but I will be rating this as I would any other animation, that said, I though the art was "unique" and kinda comical, the sound was good, got the rocky shtuff in there, and the voice, dont know if you made it or got it from somewhere but it made me chuckle so theres obviously some sense to it all, overall I think the only thing letting this down is the short length of the animation and maybe a lack of smoothness and quantity of animation, however you do have the "skill" to make a short lengthed animation that could just take the piss out of a load of things, keep at it and I would like to see some more!
Yeah, i made this because i had like 3 mountain dews and i wanted to animate X3
I'm working on some REAL animations.
They should be out soon.
hahaha, this cracked me up, especially the shoop da woop part XP the animation is fairy smooth and the artwork is nice, though the loop is annoying :O but yeah, I thought it was pretty good enough
Some nice and stylish animationfairly smooth and kinda unique art, the lip sync is done well which is hard, the voice acting is what I would call up to standard though you may need some more voice actors :D some nice comedy near the end as well, and I can see how the animation has changed since you got the tablet to do it, lucky aswell :P anyhow, this deserves to take a place in newgrounds and I say the future episodes will make its mark! keep going at it and you will get there :D
Thanks alot, That was relaly refreshing to hear. The secod part of he episode is going to be way better.
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